Make sure
to sense what
a pair of soft lips
could do to you
before you approach them.
They may leave some
elements of harshness within you
if you are not careful.
But if you could digest everything
that your lips receive from it,
the sadness, the longings,
the moments of joy, fellow-feeling,
then you can go ahead.
Love is for those who could digest it well,
with the good and bad elements
mixed in a potion, which is called
life, which waits
for you at the end of the
tunnel that is
love.
A contest entry
- otherwise... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does this make any sense?
Comments
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ha - all lips i touch whether in real life day to day kissing or in the mind, i accept it all the warts and the beauty, it's all good
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Humm..so true..I agree with you..wonderful description of the thought..well done..and thanks for entering...
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