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All Dressed Up And a Rainbow to Go!

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Dedicated to all colourful high flyers!



Wispy dress so feminine and light,
Astride a glow of rainbow colours bright,
She the shooting star does dance,
Her essence so beautiful and set to en-trance.

Her spirit face side on as seen,
With silvery mystique the transient queen,
The magic of her shooting rays,
Lighting up the darkening days.

Running through the cosmos we see,
This cosmic coloured 'Ink' spilling 'Gipsy',
Riding the crests of rainbow waves,
Her eternal freedom what mortality craves.

Stars bounce amidst the rays of colour,
If you dare blink you will miss her,
Weaving through the coloured rays,
A shooting star in the galaxy plays!

Strange tenrile like fingers scratch the sky,
Oh she does like to fly so high,
To bewtich and captivate every beholder,
She the shooting star dressed to mould her...

Watch the stripes of her opalescent light,
Scratch patterns and trails on the sky this night,
Can you catch her at the end of the rainbow,
That's for us to find out and for her to know!



Copyright:K:September 2008

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Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
A Series of Stars
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419827
3 picture options.
Enter this contest
* This is an anonymous contest - your name will be
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* Closes in 13 days, or after 15 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 300
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem



Picture Option chosen:
#2 Dress of a Falling Star by Black Nemesi at deviantart.com

Picture depicts:
'Gipsy Ink' running and asride amidst beautiful rays of
rainbow colour as free as a bird in a beautiful wispy gipsy
delicate dress in the night sky a shooting star on AP!




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  • Gypsie Ink
    September 8, 2008

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    Endearing!

    Of course my favorite line "This cosmic coloured 'Ink' spilling 'Gipsy'," I wonder where that came from...hmmmm? Thank you. A divine write. Thank you for your playful entry and best of luck in my contest.


    • Kazytc silver member
      September 8, 2008
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      Mmm funny that! So glad! LOL!

      Aww thanks for your lovely fun review of my poem which I am so glad you liked and you really are so inspiring and encouraging.
      It is a huge honour to enter your wonderful contest, your contests are always so much fun and so interesting too with lovely picture prompts as well.
      Thanks for the honour and privalege of the experience.
      I wonder if you would consider entering my contest up at:

      http://allpoetry.com/contest/2420189

      It would be a huge honour to have you enter it too and best of luck in all contests you are in and which you host and run. Hope you win Gold in every one you enter your work is fantastic and you really deserve to win.
      Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx