You talk to me
and you don't even know
how fast
you make my butterflys go
they fly around so fast
i think they could break records
with wings
of ash and gold
filling a heart
so cold
your smile
is contagious
your eyes...
are outragous
I bite my lip
to keep from smiling
haha i won't let you get to me
oh but you coax it out!
you smile that adorable smile
and i can't help it
i let it fly
and the butterflys come back
haha you make them happy
i think i can hear them sing
its amazing just how much
joy you bring
my heart won't stop
its skipping beats
i'm crazy in love
i feel the heat.
You know just how
to love
i can tell
you know just what to say
i can hear
you know just what to do
i can feel
My ButterFLys
keep flying
and swirl on
they love to do that
when your around
you make them wiggle and shake
you make them do circles
and i can feel the flips
in my heart
as they flutter away
then come right back
Thank you for making them come out
they've been gone for so long
i thought they would never come back
but i guess i was wrong........
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- Without Rules by reckless abandon.
900 points, ended September 6, 2008, 113 entries
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Comments
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this is cute. verry sweet.
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I really like the sweet feeling of this. I just think you should work on capitalizing your i's and butterflys is spelled butterflies. This is a good start. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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thank u,i'm really bad about capitalization,it was just that when i wrote this poem i had so many words swirling around i couldn't keep my head straight!
i do love you name! lol!
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