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Brown

The warmth of his eyes
gazing lovingly into mine.
The forest around us defies
common rules. This is no land of pine.

There is no green in this forest, none at all.
The brown is only enriched with the colors of Fall.
And there I sit warm in arms, though the cold air
rushes around me. All that I see is brown.
The brown of his eyes as I drown in their depths.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 5, 2008

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    Such a close feeling. It kind of reminds me of a cosy day at home, with some hot chocolate and an ice kiss.