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Half light

Lost in the half light
Those few magical seconds
Between day and night
Neither dusk nor dark
The wind twists away
To the edge of your mind
Swaying in the meadow
One with the wind
The grasses catch fire
Alight in my eyes

The half light streams
Like a river in the sky
Passes through me
Fall back...
And fly.
Lost in that magical moment
That one moment of colour
One True
Twilight.

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based on several things i guess.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 5, 2008

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    I do love the time between darkness and light, it's a very beautiful and magical inbetween. Favourite times of day.