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Vibrant Rush

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Nervous tensions filter,
with whipcord fervour,
between conductor's
magical interpretation
to baton.
Electric compositions
flow across invisible
magnetic fields,
stinging the senses
of reality.
Quicksand palpitations
energising emotions
with lightening speeds,
devastating composure.
Vibrant awareness saturates
pores,

leaving only
pleasure.

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Art work credited to : http://hirden.deviantart.com/art/Energy-Beam-7051273

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  • aboomer silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    Lovely wording and images!
    I agree with islekine - we've gotten some great entries in this contest - will be very hard to judge.
    Thank you for such a lovely entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • islekine gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Another wonderful take on the prompt!

    I am enjoying this contest more than any, in a long time...thanks so much for your wonderful entry!
    Best wishes in the contest....
    Write on!


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    Utterly symphonic, my Friend...palpable. *shivers*

     

  • Bob Fox
    September 3, 2008
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    Poet

    such harmony in your words penned by a wizard of prose. And let the song play on.


    • cutiepie gold member
      September 3, 2008
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      And on and on.... Thank you sweetie, glad you enjoyed it

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