Sultry sounds
flow softly through
time and space
capturing hypnotic stares
falling deeper into
the breakaway melody
recycled only to be heard
through someone's heart again.
Author notes
short but hopefully adequate..this reminds me of what sound waves could be like..hence the inspiration..it is a very unique picture prompt..truly fascinating..
vici377
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A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty please...
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applause
sounds of pleasure being
recycled only to be heard
through someone's heart again.
yes, everything being energy
and we
sending and receiving
good luck
moon2u -
Short - but beautiful wording, emotions and images. I loved the soft feel of this. I especially like the way you have ended this,
'recycled only to be heard
through someone's heart again'.....lovely.
Thank you for such a nice entry. Best wishes in the contest.
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I liked this, best of luck in the contest.
Slayer -
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thanks for your kind comment..
best of luck to you also..
blessings..
namaste...
r
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Beautiful write.....
I am a fan of short and to the point...so I really enjoyed this write! Best wishes in the contest!
Write on and on....
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thank you so much for your kind comment..
blessing...
namaste..
r
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