Misty rain upon my windowpanes
soothing cravings I have for you.
Sultry desires; burning fires
perchance I thought you knew.
Icy drops of tender rain, thrilling
hands long ago explained.
Earth's tempest whipping the shore
providing heated memories of red.
Sensations met; erotic an wet
the grassy knoll was our bed.
Unusual expectation secrets unfold
conquering spirit of my rogue.
Knowing I'd find you by the sea
perhaps watching sandcastles of time.
Love couldn't refrain; sex in the rain
passion liquid falling divine.
Entire-ly lost in ecstasy' kiss
praising nature's serene mist.
Author notes
Prompt: Use the picture above to drift away and give me your thoughts - mesmerize me! (I have this on my desktop - and it is awesome!)
A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does shelove the Lycan King?
Comments
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Beautiful write.
I think Brazos should see this poem to really understand no beauty on earth can really surpass true love.
How lovely to see such family love.
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Thank you so much 'ennovy' (I hope I got that right - you left your name out of the AN's, and I jotted it down on a piece of paper...lol).
I really like the soft, sensuous feel of this. It's tastefully done and has a nice emotion. Nice flow, wording and images. I liked it all, but especially,
'Knowing I'd find you by the sea
perhaps watching sandcastles of time.' - really lovely image.
Thank you for this lovely entry.
best wishes in the contest
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Sharp and clear while sultry soft. This is a technical display of mastery of your style and medium.
Love, Tom B.
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Lovely take on the prompt...
Don't forget your username in the AN....
Best wishes!!!
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