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Louder Now

We are falling
Between disaster & disbelief
Hiding behind walls of memories
Running from these tainted histories

Worlds breaking
Lifeless figures race around your head
Mouths screaming yet you hear no sound
Flashing lights echo out & around

Bodies twirlling in the broken noise
Letting soundless sighs empty out
Clocks tick as time runs out
Sinking ships carried away in the sound

Figures of decay take you out
Simply trying to get found
Drift away into a better place
Leave me behind in this pointless race

Author notes

I have no idea.

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  • mightyafrowhitey
    September 8, 2008
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    I really do think this is probablly the best thing of yours I've read.


  • reckless abandon
    September 3, 2008

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    I'm not completely sure I see where this is going/went but it actually kind of made me think. I guess it could be a lot of things. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Enigma Kyler
    September 3, 2008
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    AWESOME!

    IDK why I like it, but I do...
    What is your concept behind it?