Colors with exotic sensation
tantalize the zest on lips
as they collide into one,
over moments of swirls
ravished in iridescence
flattered by charisma
over airs of freedom,
reached inside to imagination
created by the arts
desired to be in minds eye,
a whole sight of illusion
crested in creation;
the birth of love
Author notes
http://gi262.photobucket.com/groups/ii84/4P6X685J0/ws_Inspiration_1680x1050.jpg
kkatie55
A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely wording 'kkatie55'. I really like how you have related this to the birth of love.
I especially like your lines,
'ravished in iridescence
flattered by charisma'
Thank you for this lovely entry.
best wishes in the contest
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Birth of love....
very nice take...best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
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That's a lovely take on the pic. Best of luck in the contest.
Slayer
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