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SERENITY (Acrostic)

Soundness of mind, body and soul

Elicits peace as humble goal,

Resting upon the word of GOD

Earthen vessels to Heaven trod;

Nearing the time when we shall see

Inside the truths of prophecy,

Turning our eyes toward the prize

Yearning for Home to realize.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    March 28

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    Hoodwinked!

    Excellent acrostic. You have an amazing way with words that could inspire hope and faith in almost anyone.

    I'm sorry I am late with the hoodwink, but hope you are glad for more comments!

    Shari


  • heavenly
    September 10, 2008
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    very well written

    really good poem, I love acrostics...
    Heavenly x


  • quack silver member
    September 8, 2008
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    pretty momma i love you


  • requiempoet gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    Whoa I feel peaceful and tranquil. I like this very much.


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    What an excellent Acrostic!
    They are not easy to pen and you have written this BEAUTIFULLY!
    Bravo!

    Lynda

  • goalsv
    September 3, 2008
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    Great job, a nice acrostic. Not experienced with them but this was very well done.


  • Samplette gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    An excellent acrostic. Beautifully crafted!! Very strong and carries an outstanding message. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 3, 2008
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    Aww thanx mom! You are the best!


  • ShelleyA gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    An excellent write and message. A skillfully crafted acrostic. Nice metaphor. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good rhythm, word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest. Mom

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