Colors of the Rainbow
That’s exactly what they see
Colors of the rainbow
When they look at you and me
An interracial couple
In a black and white world
Color is on the outside
But so much more is within
When will they see?
That’s there’s so much more to you and me
There are more colors in the rainbow
Than the obvious ones we see.
A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like your take on this - out of the box, yet not. I especially like,
'An interracial couple
In a black and white world
Color is on the outside
But so much more is within'
That verse really says a powerful statement.
Thank you ? (sorry, you left your name out of the AN's) for this entry.
best wishes in the contest
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I like the way you took the prompt picture and talked about something important in your life and in society. A profound write.
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Aloha!
Nice take on the picture.....we are all colorful beings......inside and out...Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
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A very good take on the pic. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Slayer -
Nice
I like the thoughts within your words
Best wishes to you in the contest
Julie
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