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Hopes a Dream ( Gold )

Liquid oils lubricate transparent swirls,

Rainbow glaze poured emotions etched,

set in skies,

after storm of life passes by.

 

Mellow tones paint horizons in the distance,

paths we will take,

as the future begins to unfurl,

for life will journey on.

 

Heart melting moments,

memories framed,

images of youth,

in yest-er year.

 

Dreams floating airless and light,

spirit of hearts,

sung rhythmic their beat,

to where love is centred in circles.

 

Feathered hopes ,

carry me,

into today,

for this is my reality.

 

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  • aboomer silver member
    September 5, 2008

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    Gorgeous wording! I really like this. It has such a fluid feel to it - 'airless and light' drifting with your images. Nice job 'Reptile Lady'!

    thank you for this beautiful entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • islekine gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Interesting how so many of us

    looked at this picture....and likened it to life...moving either forward or back.....hmmmmm
    Great take, Julie! Best wishes in the contest...
    Write on!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Wow, gorgeous write! The imagery is dream like, such a wonderful wistful air to it Superb take on the picture, good luck hunni


  • Riamh
    September 3, 2008

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    Dreams floating airless and light,

    spirit of hearts,

    sung rhythmic their beat,

    to where love is centred in circles.

    This is my favorite stanza. Best of luck in the contest,
    Slayer


  • unavailable
    September 3, 2008

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    sweeeeeet


  • daviscth silver member
    September 3, 2008

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    such amazing imagery in this poem sissy. You did a wonderful job with it. Good luck in the contest.


  • MysticalRayne
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow this is beautiful best of luck in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    September 3, 2008

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    wow julie your imagery is so wonderful from stanza one to staza five I also felt some warming soft emotions from the begining to the end a adorable poem my friend good luck in the contest x marina

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