Under a clear sky
And full moon
She dance on
a wind swept beach,
The out line of
her womanly from was
Visible through white lace
Her movements were
elegant and graceful.
Her long ebony hair
flowed like silk,
Her eyes were as green as jade,
Those eyes imprisoned
Mine and her smile
beckoned me near,
Without a word we kissed
the warmth of her body
contrasted the night
And sent shivers
through me,
my heart rate quicken
under her touch,
In the heat of passion
we abandoned clothes
she was a goddess
Her soft moonlit skin
Like marble shorn,
Soon we were
lost in the ecstasy
of physical love
our naked body’s entwined
to write poetry in the sand.
Author notes
my first attepmt at sensual, you could say i'm a virgin so be gential, sorry i mean gentle,
A contest entry
- Sensual Picture Prompt.. by Angelflower.
600 points, ended September 12, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I think this is beautiful. Are you sure this is the first one you wrote? Well done!
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Sorry I forgot some clappies
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*Phew* it's hot in here. This is great for a first attempt. The last 2 lines brought it all together. Good write, keep writing
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Beautiful!! Awesome Imagery!!!
Love the last two lines:
"our naked body’s entwined
to write poetry in the sand."
Best of luck in the contest!!! Thank you for sharing!!!
Peace, Cyn
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for your first time at sensual you did a really good job the image needed a little help, but it was still lovely.. And I believe that maybe you could have used some metaphors or something to like, leave something to the "imagination"? lol. but that could just be me.. I did still enjoy this write a alot.. Thank you very much for sharing!! keep trying and writing sensual!! you have a good start! best of luck in the contest
Angel
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beautiful Imagery in the last stanza, I love this write, the only type of "adult" writing I enjoy are one's of this nature. I enjoyed it very much.
our naked body’s
wrote poetry in the sand.
This has to be my favorite part in the whole write... it illustrates so much. ^^ Awesome again
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