The feeling of you is great
The feeling of you is what i make
I wish you were mine
I wish that to the fullest
When you touch me i know
WHen i look at you I know
The simple feeling of your breath on my skin
lets me know that there is love.
And all i want is all that of you,
no one for you to share it with but me.
I love you.,
A contest entry
- listen to your heart... by Mrs. Priester.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Amazing. i feel this way about someone in my life, and i absolutely love this poem. Great Work!!!
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Wow, uh. "The feeling of you is what i make" That makes no sense at all.
This isn't good. Keep practicing. -
nice one
this is a good poem. i like it. thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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