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From dark dreams I awaken,

To become an enlightened maid,

My visions gentle green,

My body yellow gold...

The darkness now forsaken,

I shall not be afraid,

Of what was but a dream,

The Day Star has risen in my soul,

Jesus Christ has risen in my soul...




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  • Tercil gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    so much soul divinity in this piece, it's got to be close to prayer. Nice read.

  • Anyajoellienne
    September 10, 2008
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    Beautiful , classy touch
    very dream like


  • Tirrell
    September 3, 2008
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    Enchanting, what a splendid poem in all its imagery and thought a moving inspiration.

  • Bob Fox silver member
    September 3, 2008

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    Poet

    your words are always deep and touching. Makes the resder want to stop and search his/her own soul. Do we all allow our fears to overcome us until that stand?


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your wonderful entry
    yes enlightened maid you became for our Lady is love and light
    Good luck in contest

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