From dark dreams I awaken,
To become an enlightened maid,
My visions gentle green,
My body yellow gold...
The darkness now forsaken,
I shall not be afraid,
Of what was but a dream,
The Day Star has risen in my soul,
Jesus Christ has risen in my soul...
Author notes
link to my favorite site www.harlowhiteministries.org
A contest entry
- The Witches Hummer by Angelo di Luce.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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so much soul divinity in this piece, it's got to be close to prayer. Nice read.


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Beautiful , classy touch
very dream like


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Enchanting, what a splendid poem in all its imagery and thought a moving inspiration.


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Poet
your words are always deep and touching. Makes the resder want to stop and search his/her own soul. Do we all allow our fears to overcome us until that stand?

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Thank you so much for your wonderful entry
yes enlightened maid you became for our Lady is love and light
Good luck in contest
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