To find a center you must break through.
(There's a wall, and stagnance.)
Elaborate on this;
fragrance.
put into words a feeling.
A flower.
There it is
(My pen and paper)
My computer screen
My poem
My feeling.
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Simple
Well, your poem has created a controversy. I like the simplicity. I don't feel this poem deeply, but I do get a good vibe from it. It's like a short journey. -
hummmm.... not real sure if I know the correct way to read this. Hummm....
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Great write, I found it very interesting. The layout fits the poem as well. The first two lines is my fav
but love the whole piece! Xds-gX
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You lost me on this one. It might be I am too old.
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this is excellent!! I really like your unique style of writing!! This is very well written!! I like the wording and the emotion you put in this!! Great job!! Love it!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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maybe its the ten cups of coffee I've had but I don't really feel the feeling.
wait, there's an itch n my brain, is that the feeling?
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This didn't do it for me; it's not at all a relfection on your writing, not at ALL, but just a personal preference - and that doesn't include this style of writing.
Hope that doesn't upset or offend, again, it's not relfection on you as a writer =) -
This was a very interesting layout.. I'm not really all that sure about it.. but I think it's kind of growing on me.. anyway, I really loved the poem.. It's uniquely expressed and your emotions are heartfelt.. thank you very much for sharing..
Angel
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perfection.
love you.
♥
whisper
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