Why do you have to leave me now?
I was in the middle of loving you
My clear feelings are now left misty
Forced again to find something so true
They say that teenage love
isn't even real at all
But when the beating heart brakes
We have the same distance to fall
When it comes down to the point
I was ready to end my life with you
Mask of shock when it was over
Though, in my heart I already knew
So I brace myself to begin falling
With my heart taped down inside
Knowing that our love was once a flower
Now left in the dark to die
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:( I feel you!
so sad but so honest.
I have been there too I was 19 when I first fell in love...oh what a fall it was when I realized that it would never work. my fav. part is
They say that teenage love
isn't even real at all
But when the beating heart brakes
We have the same distance to fall
they think that age defines it all!!
I was looking to enter one of your contests but I am weeks late lol I'll look into you again and hopefully next time i won't be late so I can win lol.
great write I connected to it and I think if you read acouple of my poems you'll know why!
::huggs&kisses::
LB
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Compelling and beautiful. Amazing, trully.
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Great way of portraying this...love is like a flower in so many ways...it takes care, love, gentleness, light, etc... and sometimes no matter how hard you try it still whithers... nice job...
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This is so sad however you did great in writing it
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hehe, thank you
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