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time passes

the creek flows quickly
smoothly wash old stones -
angelic demon

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haiku prompt
kappa definition #3. Water Demon

3 lines non-traditional

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  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    perfect haiku from the start. Congrats. One of the better demon hakiu's that I really liked. Never changing as time goes by and yet not evil, just the sorce of water. thx for entering.


  • Rovingone gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    Extremely all emcompassing. The classic Haiku employed with great precision and simplicity. Beautiful