His stinging red nose
was livid with his charmless
manner; one more line?
Of course he
will, control
unheard of.
Watching birds flee nest
he ponders hopelessly, then
flies in blind pursuit.
Author notes
I would like it if anyone reading would sit and try to fully understand this one. And if you don't feel at home with it, just message me 
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Comments
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nice senryu...
Thanks for participation.
Good luck,
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