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The Force

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It’s in me and around me
interlacing mother earth
meridian lines of power
I connected to at birth.

It’s in the air I breathe
below the ground I tread
the engine of my dreams
firing synapses in my head.

Spewing life from craters
spiraling smoke fills the sky
manifesting fertile ground
when lava flow is dry.

It’s the spark that lit our sun
and bathed the sky in stars
illuminating the moon and, 
impassioning Venus and Mars.

It’s the aura of the universe
illumination of the Devine
we’re inexorably connected
until, the end of time.

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  • Dark Otter
    December 23, 2008
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    Well done!

    A deserved silver for just the thought alone.


  • trekkergirl
    October 27, 2008

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    vaery nice write you have here. I can see how this one won a trophy good job. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it in my contest.


  • LittleMoon silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    The energy of all that is, has been or ever will be. Very well explained and presented.


  • SpiritMother
    September 27, 2008

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    A unique look into what we are all aware of at some point in our lifespan, although we may not realize it at the moment. The Force is another great way to express the spiritual essence of all that is..


  • SweetRoses
    September 26, 2008

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    When I first saw the title I thought it was going to be something about star wars.
    You're right though. Everything has a life force surrounding it, it makes us who we are. Nicely written.


  • aboomer silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    wow - I agree with islekine - this is one of yours I think is the best, too! Great wording, wonderful job with the rhyme - well done all around!
    Thank you for the great entry.
    best wishes in the contest.


  • islekine gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Wow Bill...

    I really really like this!! I think this is one of your best writes so far...thanks for sharing!! Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on!


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 3, 2008
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    A oneness with Mother Earth's gift of life..Most enjoyable

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