I shut doors
you are already inside
fossil sitting on my dreams
tempests do not wash.
my heart beats
thinking those sweet moments
veins fill with energy
on edges of start ups
as athles wait on doted line.
filled with emptiness
as light every iota of universe,
when you leave
darkness stretch,
light burned even twinkling stars
love holds such power
through you manifesting,
I held you to bosom
only through fantasy.
you never leave
sapping all energy,
I smell every corner
as pussi cat does
until exhaust
leave in fit of rage.
A contest entry
- otherwise... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 8 entries
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Humm..there are many innovative immageries brinigng the feel of your heart aew here my friend.....well done..and thanks for sharing...
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very nice. elegant, sad, desperate. original. a bit odd. true art. sorry. im very tired.
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a great poem dad good luck in the contest maralisa
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there are spelling mis takes I corrected. This computer is infected. Messages are not going out, instant replies I am not giving. Sorry
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I suppose this would be a bad time to say I'm logging out, right?
great write
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