My body hums like a well oiled machine
Neurons firing in perfect sync
My cerebellum is uncluttered as I seek my muse
Thoughts and visions streaming at a steady pace
Staccatoed inspirations accentuated
By nicotine and caffeine infusions
I am morphing into myself
Melding my three parts into one harmonious being
My skin tingles as adrenaline saturates every pore
While endorphins stampede through my bloodstream
I feel young and vibrant and invincible
It's good to be alive
Author notes
ratkos artist credit http://hirdenh.deviantart.com/art/energy-beam-7051273 prompt energy/vibes
A contest entry
- Energy/Vibes - aboomer and islekine by aboomer.
525 points, ended September 18, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great wording! I sure wish my mind was uncluttered! LOLOL
I can really relate to:
'Thoughts and visions streaming at a steady pace
Staccatoed inspirations accentuated
By nicotine and caffeine infusions'
Yes, great to be alive - thank you for the lovely entry.
best wishes in the contest. -
Great thoughts!
And it is really Great to be alive!! Thanks so much for your entry!! Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
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Yes it is good to be alive...through all the ups and downs it still feels great...nice flow and feel to your words...makes one feel what you feel and it is good...well done.
Best to you!
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I could feel the tingle....and yes, it is good to be alive
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Intoxicating !!! I love the use of biological terms. Never thought of having coffee as a "caffeine infusion" but it may as well be
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