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For the ability of the rocks,

  Who stands on their own

    While being josseled by the sea.

 

For the calmnes of the water,

  Invading the land

    To lap gentle the shore with love.

 

For the given day,

  Giving all  that it had

    Handing it's self over to the night.

 

For the colors we have enjoyed.

  Still amazing us on into the night

    Calming our fears and tears with delight.

 

He says I can give you strength,

  I can give you love.

    If you have the will to walk in my light.

 

  9-03-2008

 

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  • trekkergirl
    September 16, 2008
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    this is very good!


  • Samplette gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    AH, you have done a most beautiful job with this awesome write. Very softly stated, but very powerful! Thank you for entering the contest. I am giving you 300 points for being the first to enter.
    Sam