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skyline views


blazing lights summon my inner senses
encircle a jagged crust of icy crest
celestial beams form artistic heavens
small recompense for the deathly cold

 

spirits give one final chance to live

a ghostly voice tempts hopeless souls

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  • Karlie67
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow! I love how you have ended this piece with a ghost, fantastic. Love this write! Good luck in the contest & well done on this write!!

    Karlie
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