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Rays of Gold

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Dedicated to the arrival of the Golden Age




It seemed like the end of the world,
The Golden Age had dawned and hurled..

Hurled us into an orbital shift,
The good and the bad souls like sand to sift...

The barren dunes of former earthly life,
Desserted of the former battled strife...

Bands of Gold stripe a dark blue sky,
Like a millions spirits had let fly..

But then it dawned on me that I had transcended,
To another planet and my life form ended...

Have I come back to whence I came,
Or is this just some surrealist end game?!

Author notes

Allpoetry.com Contest
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  • Tercil gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    You have sparkle in your work, that I can neve rrember seeing before. Or should I say, it is so refreshing to read your ideas, on optimism, as the ray of gold here seems.


    • Kazytc silver member
      September 5, 2008
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      Thanks Millions Tony!

      Thanks millions Tony, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it. I am a very metaphysical thinker and very much a 5th dimension dweller already! My motto for life ...

      "Where there is life there is hope, and where their is hope there is life"

      "Nothing good or bad lasts forever"

      "Out of bad can come good and vice versa if you don't stay clued in"!

      Good luck in all your contests, I hope you win gold in all
      of them, your work is excellent.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

  • carole21
    September 4, 2008
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    nice take on the prompt . . liked the pictures . . good use of rhyme . . congrats on the trophy


  • Karlie67
    September 3, 2008

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    Amazing, I'm stunned at how you've taken this prompt.
    Love the poem and how you made an effort with the background and other pictures.

    Well done and good luck in the contest!

    Karlie
    xx