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Sorrow's Flightless Marathon In Black.-(a pre-write)




Once fluffy white feathers preened daily,
water resistant and lovely to behold,
Now send my beak agape at the horror
of my toil in the oils, from the spoils of man.

Just an ordinary dive for a plump fish,
and suddenly I am a lump of living coal,
eyes blurred beyond any ability to see predators,
wings mired, I am a crippled land creature now.

Reeking of a scent to noxious to breathe,
far from the water lest it mirror my plight,
just days from dying in the baking sun,
where I will become rigid, and squat.

Another tragic twenty-first century monument
to all the cars that slow down as they drive by,
powered by the essence of what has slain me,
a black spot marring the sands of time,
a cancer quite palpable on the shores of my homeland.


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  • Frogzter gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    Oh, the worst kind of literal blackness. This nearly brought tears to my eyes. Just the sight of that poor bird and the blackness it is engulfed in makes me want to scream. Great take on the prompt. Thanks for joining in and best wishes in the contest.

    Frogz~


  • Frozentearz
    September 5, 2008

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    Oh Man you have hit on some ugly blackness indeed within this write, Such a cancer of oil indeed.
    Very profound work here, Thanks for joining in.
    Warm thoughts.
    Frozentearz