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under my power

when you hold me its magic

i want to crawl inside of you

every touch of you fingers

draw me closer still too

the flickers and flutters

from you skin to mine

electrify's my desire

to ignites to a fire

i groan when you kiss me

the butterfly's released

each purr and each moan

just take's me higher

you stroke me with sureness

gentle but with forces

your lips on my pelvis

makes me convulse

i slip down before you

on my knees i surrender

take you in my palms

my tongue lites your desire 

with teasing insurances

i gain your complete trust

handcuff snap  slowly close

over your willing wrist

finally submission

you give to me

the power is fragile

but given freely

i'm a dominatrix

now do as i please

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please Credit: Passion_by_Melindee

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  • Angelflower
    September 10, 2008

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    This was such a sensual and exotic write.. I love the ending of it a dominatrix, how lovely..lol.. Thank you very much for sharing, I really enjoyed reading it.. Best of luck in the contest..

     

    Angel 


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    Nice
    You read her mind perfectly
    Sensual lust etched within
    Love the line I am dominatrix ..
    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie