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Push Them

You said “stay still and your words will be
The only thing that's moving me”
I said I needed you like breathe in my lungs
We each said forever and walked the other way
It just goes to show you
Our words only go as far as we push them

We wrap the noose around our necks
We tie the knot on our memories
We scream out loud, "It's kiling me!
It's killing me! How the hell'd you get to me?"

We stepped off the ledge with our left feet
We fell together, and died the same
You fell for me, and I for you
"Just let this kill me"

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  • MissyYates gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    I love how you always relate your feelings to an event. It creates such strong imagery and I absolutely love the second stanza