The Instructions1
He stroked his cock wanting its tip wet
when he bought it to her waiting lips
and she moaned a distant pleasure.
Her excitement he could not measure.
“Keep your mouth open” he directed as he removed her gag
“for what I am about to give you must beg.”
“Please, Master, more.
Fill the mouth of this cum whore
Face fuck me like never before
and give me the cream I am longing for
Come to the other side of my imprisonment
climb the stairs for which they’re meant
and let me suck your instrument
until I am filled and you are spent.”
With easy thrust he replaced the gag
with his warm meat for which she begged
and shot the wad which she now swallowed
with greedy tongue.
“Keep your mouth open for we’re not done.”
He instructed.
He re-gagged her and descended to your rear, while on the x-rack she stayed suspended. “Lift yer ass,” he commanded as the lube on her ass coolly landed.
Her eyes startled wide the realization as her master pushed the dildo deep inside her dark hole which longed for the master’s warmer sweeter meat pole.
“You will feel this long after I’m done.” As the master commenced to work this slave's ass and play with her cunt just for fun. Her juice on his fingers belied her pain as he made her struggle against the restraint.
"This is not ended and nor has your pain." he informed her as the worked her ass again and again.
"I know you are enjoying this, but I want you to listen carefully to these instructions...and follow them precisely when I set you free. Do you understand?"
The slave shook her head and gave her wet consent to her master's hand.
Instructions 2
"You shall come when I call, even if you must crawl.
You must cum if I command and obey all MY demands
You must always give ME your all, every time W/we ball.
You will always be my pet.
These things you will never forget.
I want you always wet and so I want inside your mind.
I may not be always gentle, but I always will be kind.
You must never try to run away or avoid doing what I say.
You will remember always this is fun
and will always consent to clean me after I have spent."
A contest entry
- Tease Me, Please Me by sensualbutterfly.
450 points, ended September 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show Me Your Sexual Energy. by Juggalette Sammy.
1000 points, ended June 10, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Mmmm Mmmm Mmmm!! I absolutely loved this write. Very detailed instructions indeed. To the point and very erotic. Sensual in a manner, but dirty at the same time. You most definitely and successfully disrupted my day. And I am absolutely okay with that. The imagery and the rhythm had me on the edge of me seat, and left my mouth watering.
Thank you so much for entering this poem and Good Luck! -
There now you have really done it! You've gone, set the page on fire...this is super hot...totally erotic & purely sexual.....a sizzling hot write...novy
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Beautifuly Erotic
This is so good you make the reader feel like they are actually there and part of the poem it self.
But when its totaly finished it will be Great. i hope too read the finished poem, at some time.
Eamon.
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There are a few things wrong with this...one you switch on the view of your characters which makes it a little hard to read...
the fourth stanza it should read " With ease " not with easy.
I don't think you have to say " Instructions 1 and instructions 2 unless you're going to have two separate accounts of the exchange between Master and slave.
You might also want to use the protocol and capitalize when the Master is saying things...
This seems rushed. You might want to flesh it out a little more and detail a session or scene with the Master and slave. -
you are lit with fire artist you are a lovely master here i see good luck to you in the contest for this write
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Geee Whizz this is good!
This is so good you make the reader feel like they are actually there in the scene you so vividly paint with brilliant poetic graphics and imagery, together with dialogue which adds to the ambiance and intesity of the piece.
Brilliant realism and insignts into the sort of scenario painted here.
Great work, bravo love it, and good luck in the contest this should have a great chance of winning!
Well done! Bravo! I'm Speechless (LOL!).
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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WOW! That is hot! Great job! Thanks for entering!
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