Watching you with admiring eyes
I saw love that'll never die.
You displayed fiery lust for her,
saw all in you grow stronger.
With each grip you gave her body
love grew jealously within me.
Admired your passion with my eyes
never have I done such before.
I hope someday you'll love unto me
as you do with your sweet lady.
A contest entry
- PICTURE PROMPT: Dig Deep and Take me through this picture....ADULT: Romance-sensual-fantasy by PassionsPromise.
900 points, ended September 18, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wonderful job here,
thanks so much for your entry.
many can relate to this piece...
been there i know
Good luck
Passions
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Thank you
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Came Here To Return The Favor
Don't know what to say on this poem - the rhyme and flow is a little bumpy - the story is not rare - the message comes through loud and clear - good luck in the contest - keep on keeping on - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) -------------------------------------------- hagd
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not tryin for a rhymer here. But thank you so much.
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Very nice write...an outsider longing to have what another has.......I could feel the wealth of emotions...
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deep and endeaqring poem, I do love poets behind such poetry
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yes, I like endeaqring poems.
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