Listen to your heart,
tell me please,
how you feel about me.
Your feelings I need to
know.
How much,further can
we go.
You know how I feel
about you,
why carn't you feel
the same way too.
Let your feelings show.
I want to put my arm
around you,
I guess I am scared too.
Scared that I will
loose you,
If my heart could
talk to yours,
then they would
both decide,
for you and I.
What have we got too loose,
why carn't you say,
what I want to hear,
You know how I feel,
in your near.
Is it so hard,for you,
to say,
then listen to your heart,
it will show the way.
Author notes
Listen to your heart.Titel A.
A contest entry
- listen to your heart... by Mrs. Priester.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This one is beautiful! I too have a piece called Listen To Your Heart, very similar in context! Beautiful
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I like the lines.."If my heart could talk to yours, then they would both decide"
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The two last lines are very beautiful, I love em'. The rest is kinda, meh, mediocre.
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wonderful!!
i expecially like the last two lines. 'listen to your heart, it will show the way.' wonderful and good luck in the contest. -
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Thank you , Carl.
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