The bourne of ice
made of fire
candent and bright
with desire
'Gainst the cairns
she lights the way
of and out
with dismay.
The carse shant move
'gainst the bourne
his path is set
mores are torn.
Lea and veldt
they sway their grass
talk and chat
with morass.
The dams they burst
with much froe
they feel but naught
'gainst her glow
Cloud and sky
They play with him
give her rain
and good whim
The bourne of ice
flows on while
the rest do watch
with a smile.
Author notes
Thanks to Poison Ivy, whom inspired this
First time posting anything ever. Any comments welcome
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Beautiful... I love how each item has its own affect. Sweet imagery too
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welcome to allpoetry!
An excellent first post it is. Such a wonderfuly creative and well worded poem. I like the form you used here also. Very well put together and written out. Thank you for sharing your talent with us all, I hope you will continue to do so.
Enjoy the site.
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welcome to all poetry
Hi DreamWanderer
Very cool poem, i like the way you speak in this poem
well done poet please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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