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Amber Lights and Lonely Nights

Broken inside, as the amber lights fade.
Darkness ensues and as it swallows up the day.
The pain is everlasting, what more can I say?
Torment is treatment, the rest is 'round the way.

A forceful catalyst for broken down dreams,
hell-bound I battle against the unseen.
Realism is is an impression, Not all is what it seems,
A joker's sick prank leaves my stomach turnin' green.

The winter came back, cruel and cold like a glacier.
The sun hides his face, to scared to be a savior.
Sometimes I like to think I was better off before,
The loneliness burns and cuts deep to the core.

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  • fairytalelovestory
    September 5, 2008
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    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • nilav
    September 3, 2008

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    the powerful expressions carry the pain and loneliness to the core....and the sun hiding the face made interesting reading