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Loving That Special Someone

a different kind of feeling,
when i knew this special being.
someone to love unconditionally,
and took my heart internally.

i love a person because i felt it,
listened to the music of heartbeat.
remove the barriers sunk to mind,
worries and fears are left behind.

for this someone is truly special,
and this person is so substantial.
important to my life like treasure,
loving so deep that i can't measure.

a person who works serious enough,
but still we find our time to laugh.
a person so studious and dedicated,
to me this person is committed.

proudly saying i love you my love,
can't explain the feeling i have.
love and care that you make me feel,
all pains and wounds start to heal.

i love you because i love you,
not just a phrase to tell you.
you put tears in my brown eyes,
and put on my face the sweet smiles.

this is life when we are loving,
ups and downs come along the living.
thank you for you give me the love you have,
and i love you for i believe in our love.

loyalty and trust i give to you,
for you're a person who is true.
a God fearing one with a tight faith,
i believe God has plans more than a date.

i'm just hear beside you supporting,
and give you my full understanding.
i love you so much may sounds plain,
but that's the feeling so hard to explain.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    This is a sweet definition of true love and commitment. It is a wonderful write. Thank you for the entry Hun!