float on the surface
splash in the sun, or
stand neck deep in shame
afraid to move
either way, you're naked
and eventually
someone will see
Author notes
prompt: Skinny Dipping, Think metaphorically
A contest entry
- Skinny Dipping by Danna Hobart.
375 points, ended September 21, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is BRILLIANT! Thank you for entering.
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Thank you
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This is good--I love the common sense approach--whimsical.
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Thanks
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from gentleman to genetilia man
from woman to "Woe!!man" check her out, from well endowed to cold water shrinkage, from warm summer memories to "Thanks for the mammaries"...lol skinny dipping is not all it's cracked up to be, ...pun intended, What happens in ones bathing trunks should stay in one's bathing trunks...but hey sometimes the mood strikes to shed all of ones worldly trappings, yet the eternal question arises, "How does one rub sun lotion on one's privates without looking like a pervo???....LMAO...great stuff you have bared here....Artis
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So true
Good write for the contest
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I would laugh but I might not stop. I got in trouble as a kid for telling girls their dermis was showing.
I have always enjoyed how much harder it is to lie when you are naked. But nude we become art.
Love, Tom B.
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not if they're all wearing patches on all their eyes... slim odds, I know.
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slim for sure, not even the pirate below is wearing one
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LMAO
Wonderful take on the prompt
Woot!
"you're naked
and eventually
someone will see"
Thanks, you placed a smile on my face
Take care
David
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thanks
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