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It Doesn't Matter Anymore

 

 

A thousand tears

I've cried for you

no longer matters

to anyone but myself.

 

Imagine the hurt

and pain that

I've endured

for you to push me aside

as though I mean nothing.

 

How many times

does one need to hear

that they are worthless

before they die inside?

 

I can no longer

be your whipping post

for I am ...

 

Nobody

 

 

Author notes

30-60 words
Prompt: http://czas.deviantart.com/art/Worthless-tears-8045356

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    It is terrible to feel this way as if you are unimportant in the world to anyone. You did this so beautifully. Well done. Best to you in the contest.


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    September 3, 2008

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    This is truly beautiful! I love it and like the pic you used too, this is a short poem but it's so powerful I really enjoyed it