When I close my eyes at night,
and fade off to sleep,
in my dreams I keep
you close -- holding on so tight.
Poetic whispers pierce my heart,
softly told in my ear;
love draws me near
to you from which I'm never apart.
Author notes
Woot! Happy 200th... ~ This should be a swing'in party~ 
A contest entry
- Celebrating 200 days on AP prompt is a verse. by Topaze.
1000 points, ended September 12, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I like honesty... I can't learn unless you tell me how you really feel.
Comments
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poetry for creeting cards
That's the thought I get from this. Poetry for a couplethat are established...anniversary p'raps. very lovely pen.
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"Weekend Hugs"
Beautiful and amazing heartfelt poem! I can so relate I dream each night of my four sons who are not in my life at this time, and meet them in my dreams each night. Thanks for sharing your amazing talents. Good luck in the contest.
Here is a
from me to you.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Theresa
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a good piece of poetry penned, ah love, to have its smiling essence ruffling our sleepy feathers, this is why we are alive - to capture these moments of beauty, all the pain is worth it if we find the joy in life.
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soft and feirce
Thats just so pretty. Its not harsh and in your face but it has its own silken intensity, so well woven and breathtaking
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this is so lovely and the imagery is dreamy. i love the shorts
softly told in my ear;
love draws me near
that tickles my tongue to say it
beautifully penned
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This poem hold such a large amount of imagery... I just love the flow. The first stanza is really awesome.
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A lovely piece, thank you for this fine entry in the contest.
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