What is love?
Is it just a lie
that people tell to justify
what they feel inside?
Why does love break my heart?
Why did it bring us together
only to tear us apart?
The agony it causes me
Seems at times, to much to bear.
Yet I would not change it for the world
Because I know deep down inside
That love it a wonderful thing.
And when I look into your eyes
I forget all the things that people say
That would make a wiser woman
shy away.
That safety of your arms,
the warmth of your touch,
the passion in your kiss,
make me blush.
I know that I truly love you.
Do you love me too?
A contest entry
- listen to your heart... by Mrs. Priester.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful!!
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thanks for that Sorrow. I guess I wasnt paying attention to what I was typing.
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I REALLY like the first to last line, A LOT.
I don't like this one though: "What is love?
Is it just a lie
that people tell to justify
the pain they feel inside?"
It makes absolutely NO sense. -
wonderful!!
this is an amazing write. i wish you luck in the contest.
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