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Siren's Call

I face the dimly lighted wall of stone, with a feeling of uneasiness
In this abby, place of refuge, I feel an unwelcomed presence.
I hear the footsteps coming closer into this room without a door
Without a second thought or hesitation, I'm quick to draw my sword.
The steps com even closer, now a figure in the light
A woman's frame, I could tell even with this limited sight.
Night was forthcoming upon us, as she forthcame to me
A sly smirk was on her face of astonishing beauty.
The closer she came the more a realized the clothes she wore were scarce
no more than her panties coverd her waiting lips, her breasts covered by a scarf
I could feel the blood rushing to both my heads
The blushing on my face however, was far less evident.
She walked even closer, pressing her body against mine
the took her scarf and placed it around my neck, forcing me to look into her eyes
Her nipples were hard against my chest, and she looked up at me with a grin
She said "I don't believe I know your name, would you tell me what it is?"
"I am called Nexus", I responded, now almost a slae to her fiery chrams
She proceded to release the scarf and used her hand to stroke my arm
Her hand slowly made its way down my body, I could tell that her game was lust
She finally stopped when she reached my cock and whispered, "You wanna fuck?"
Waiting for no answer, she tore my shirt from my chest
she said "Put down that sword of steel, I wish to feel your sword of flesh."
Reluctantly I obeyed her, dropping it with a clang
She smiled seductively , removed my pants and continued to stroke my wang
I could resist no longer, pulling down what kept her from being bare
My eyes rested on the spot between her thighs until with a grin she said "It's not polite to stare."
She held her eyes gaze with mine as she dropped to her knees
and pulled me all into her mouth starting to suck on me
I could feel myself getting harder, me penis starting to throb
I was about ready to burst when I felt her stop.
No sooner than she stood up straight did I go down on her
sucked the lips in between her legs as she moaned and purred
Her breathing became intense and her moans turned into gasps
"Nexus," she said, "stop, I dont want to cum too fast!"
I obliged her and was pinned down when I was about to rise
She took my dick into her puss and gave my cock a ride
I dont think I'd expected her to be quite so wet
I sat up a little so that while she rode I could suck her breast
She moaned and gasped as she rode and she got her nipples sucked
I turned her onto her back and  said "It's my turn to fuck."
I plunged into her, her legs around me tight
I did as she expected and fucked her with all my might
We came simultaneously and I gae her breasts a final lick
before laying beside her. She rested her and on my dick.
"That was fun," she whisperd as she slitherd down and gave a farewell kiss to my balls
and left out of the room as I realized I'd submitted to a Siren's call

Author notes

Kind of a modern twist of the Greek Mythological Sirens. This is my first attempt at erotica, so please let me know what you thought of it.

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  • afroqban
    January 29
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    im not an erotic poet, but i think this is really good and artsy


  • Poetic Butterfly
    September 22, 2008

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    Hot!

    Ok, now whoa.....I like the whole seductive thang..her cumin to u..hehehe That shit right here...lol...hot shit son. Few typos, jus incase u may wanna look that over, but I understood what was goin on


  • Blueskywonder
    September 5, 2008

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    I think you have the potential to be a very good writer of erotic having expressed this piece with a heated intensity and burning passion. Great write!