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09.03.08

I don't know how long I can do this
This distance--
Not just physical.

I have so much I wish I could tell you
These secrets--
They hurt me.

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  • LadyOfFate
    November 15
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    this is very short. but it is very deep. a cavern is carved between you and the other person in such a way that it seems you can no longer see anything else but the caveren that lies between you and them. And only you seen to be able to see it at all. It is a sad and terrible thought if not anything else.

    Oh yeah and chibi.... why haven't you written anything new!? I rarely see you! Wah!
    Love ya, Fate!

  • HombreCambiado
    September 3, 2008
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    Short, poignant, beautiful.