Lacking from such grief,
Puzzles of pieces, Contains a heart so froze,
Cracked-up Concrete,
Nudging out a budding rose.
A whisper in the wind,
Reassuring this sinning never ends,
My eyes and ears open,
Listen as my attention spans and my life grips into focus.
An unendless motion catching me out the ocean,
Inflicted yet press forward still in search of my destination,
Addicted to your beautiful face, clutch grace and stray from demons in mazes,
Eternal wheels spinning, Mimick my undying devotion.
Pursue the truth and keep the faith, In God's eyes the only proof,
Life can be ruthless, Follow your heart and what it saith,
Stars glisten in the moonlit sky, Similar to our dreams held up so high,
Spread your wings and fly, Take a deep breath and watch your blessings multiply.
A contest entry
- [cheer me up] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended September 7, 2008, 36 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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o0o0o Congrats on the green my friend a fine write you have penned
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Thank you a big basket full of hugs for allowing me to post this on Poetry Planet.
I have come to gather up your poem. 
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Lovely poem! May I please post it on the poetry blog I run for a newspaper in California? It is called Poetry Planet and The Reporter is the newspaper. I am a feature writer and am blog master for the poetry blog. We get hundreds of hits a day and your poem would be enjoyed by many people.
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I really like this. It's cute and uplifting. I like some of the phrases and descriptions you used like "Cracked-up Concrete, nudging out a budding rose". Great job and thanks for entering.
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thank you
i appreciate it. i didnt have long to post becuz i thought it was ending at midnight. if u ever want another poem just let me know. PeAcE -
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I extended the contest a couple more days so feel free to add to/edit your poem if you wish or if you feel like it you can enter more.
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nevermind i figured it out. i edited and added some more. i may work on it more tonight too. hope u like it
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hey.
how do i add to and edit. i dont see where i can do that -
hell yes
that's awesome. i'll do some editing and adding to this then. thx for letting me know. see ya later HoT STuFF
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