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Screaming walls of glass, writing sonnets under my name.

Remember nothing after this, wake up in hope's euphoria.

Intelligence as collateral damage 

[Take two and call me in the morning]

 

Shine illumination on tattered infatuation,

bringing nature a new noise and

hitting me with a right hook.

 

Blend hypocrisy with a cute face,

like death wearing a smile.

Gorging on the masses' finest food.

 

Gripping time by its hands,

rewinding your masterpiece.

Originality faced suspension,

hiding inside a cage.

Breaking status quo,

from all alike to archetype.

 

[Wake up, it's morning]

 

 

Author notes

AP Name: Lowercase Prelude
I am in princess of my love's AP family

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  • AutumnsFlame
    October 18, 2008

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    hmmm.... Usually, I'm not a freeverse person. I did like this though, because of all the beautiful imagery in this. You wrote it very poetically, which is what I like to see.

    "Blend hypocrisy with a cute face,
    like death wearing a smile."

    Those were my favorite lines. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Very interesting
    Thank-you for entering and I am enjoying reading such a variety of poetry , unfortunately the contest requires a pair of poems so I shall not be able to consider this for the final, thanks again for the read and all the best.

    JEff


  • Mrs. C.
    September 12, 2008
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    thank you for entering
    this is a very intresting poem... im not excatly sure what it is about.


  • swim.x
    September 12, 2008

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    Pretty cool poem I liked the ideas you put in here. They were great. And the messages in square brackets just about hit the nail on the head. I've been thinking those things for a while now. I don't think that people realise that this is all they've got, and then they go around making fools of themselves. Great write.
    Congratulations.
    Good luck in the contest.
    Chin up,
    Swim.x


  • the-gifted
    September 7, 2008

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    wow i really like the way you wrote this. the words just are powerful to me for some reason. good luck in the contest.


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    I love the lines "Blend hypocrisy with a cute face,

    like death wearing a smile." I really like this one...Im not sure why but i do :]


  • reckless abandon
    September 3, 2008

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    When I was reading this it made me think of some of the poems I've written and felt so strongly about. Its amazing. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Xianaria gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    this is really good. i like the last stanza, the ending is quite strong. well done, my friend, & best wishes in the contest~


  • Karlie67
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow, this is written like a song it's really good I like it alot. the part I like best is :

    Blend hypocrisy with a cute face,
    like death wearing a smile.
    Gorging on the masses' finest food.

    It reminds me of my cat!
    Lol, well done good luck in the contest!

    Karlie
    xxx

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