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Simple Eye

Simplicity lasts longer than riches.
And a good name is better than gold.
For when your wealth runs dry,
you still have a good eye.

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feeling lifted up today. ♦♥♦

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  • AsIThink gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    This is wonderful in brevity and meaning. I totally agree with you. Bravo! Wisdom shines through in this meaningful piece.

    AsIThink...


  • Poetdontknowit
    September 3, 2008

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    Hmmmm

    A true lil write you have penned here, but I feel as if you aren't very descriptive. This is what I would call a nonpoetic piece.
    POETDONTKNOWIT
    DESCRIBING IT HER OWN WAY


  • Manish
    September 3, 2008
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    O I forgot to applaud. Once again I say this is a very beautiful poem. I hope you win the contest.

  • Manish
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow!!! This is simpl beautiful! It's really very important as a human being to have that simplicity. People should not be too proud and also unrealiable, unpredictable, heartless. Wealth and riches are not so important - it's the heart, emotions, smiles and life that matters. I hope everybody would realize this and the world would be such a pleasant place to live in.

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