Who's gonna call on Sunday morning?
When you're hung over and insecure on your bedroom floor
Who's gonna drive you home?
When you find yourself lost and there's no place else to go
Darling I don't think you understand
I just want one more chance
To put my arms in fragile hands
and call myself yours again
Let me be that person;
Please don't walk away
Author notes
"Totally Awesome Monkies"
I hope you enjoy it ^.^
The lines:
"Who's gonna call on Sunday morning?
Who's gonna drive you home?
I just want one more chance
To put my arms in fragile hands"
From Paperthin Hymn by Anberlin
A contest entry
- PIF 10 poets 10 lines lyrics contest by trinajean.
600 points, ended September 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i think was a well done piece.
i liked the raw emotion you put into it.
but, I don't know if I like how you put the percise lyrics in your poem.
overall, enjoyable.
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Well what exactly were you looking for? O.o
Sorry, maybe I just didn't understand.
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