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When I look at you I see beauty
I see someone who truely cares about me
Someone who would do anything for me
I see the most amazing girl I've ever met
Beautiful, Funny, Sweet, Caring,
And best of all just plain fun to be around
I would do anything to be with you
Seeing you smile makes me smile
Your laugh makes my day
When see your face in the morning
It wakes me up and makes happy
You make my world go around
You make my life worth living
You always make me feel better
Even when it feels as though
The world is against me
You pick me back up
When life knocks me down
When I need someone to talk to
You're always there for me
And that means alot to me
You make me feel comfortable
Like I can finally let my guard down
And show you the true me
With you I can break the bottle
The bottle where I keep all my emotions
I LOVE YOU BABY!

Author notes

well as you guys probably know this is the first poem in like a year so its not very good but i needed to write something so....well there it is

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  • Sea-Shell
    April 17
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    this is sooo cute. and really romantic. it is a good poem even if you dont think so


  • Dirty and Broken
    September 5, 2008
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    makes me jealous, if u really wanna knor the truth
    but u probably don't