Dark damp dory glides on crimson ewe
Swelling through the azuline blue seas
Vivid Golden Fleece wafting over the helm
Orion overturns the blood red Sacred Heart
Agamemnon Sprawls with a golden grin
Blue speckled black nightingales scream
Bloody shrieks to the dishonored gold veil
Light blue robed nuns hum Hail Mary
Death’s Raven circles sol’s dimming gold rays
Eerie bloody woods await the dank dory
Agamemnon creeps as the sieved liquid bleeds
Noble golden king inherited the sin
Bearing the murderous guilt of his father
Clytemnestra left plotting a blue bitter demise
A contest entry
- 99 GRAPHICS OF GOLD ON THE WALL...A Quote & Colour Theme by Blue Rew.
1095 points, ended September 13, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This reads like a war drum. The lines throb nicely with images and motion. Each feels like a separate sentence demanding it own attention, yet all part of the drum.
well done,
Tom B.
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Each line is a separate sentence, each pulls its
weight in focus and colour. I like how you've
managed a story, shades and alliteration all showcased
within brevity. Blue
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Good history & poem!
You did your homework, too! Good luck in the contest, sir!
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This is vivid in imagery and soul...best of luck in the contest! Very nice take on this.
Love~
~Azlyn~
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