I hate that you smile at me while lying through your teeth
I hate the way you look and look at every girl you meet
I hate when you don’t call and I say I don’t care
I hate even more when I’m alone and you’re not here
I hate that you can’t see your friends are using you
I really hate your mother and she hates me too
I hate the fact that you have very little ambition
I hate that I didn’t listen to my women’s intuition
I hate all the little stupid, moronic things you do
I guess put it all together and; Yeah, I really hate you
Author notes
Option #4
10 Things I Hate About You
A contest entry
- Lots Of Options by stargazer..
525 points, ended December 27, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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amazing
it shows alot of emotion its great
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thank you for taking the time to read and leaving such a nice comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Amazing
fantasic write...
a women's perspective on the mostly ignorant man...
GREAT WORK
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thank you for taking the time to read and leaving a comment. It is greatly appreciated. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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I could relate to this poem, and while I am sorry if it is really true, I must say that it made me laugh. Anything is funnier when you can rhyme it.
My favorite two lines were:
"I really hate your mother and she hates me too
I guess put it all together and; Yeah, I really hate you"
They say that the best jokes are only funny because they are true.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and to leave such a nice comment. I'm glad to say it's not true. LOL. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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This is really good!
It really puts my "I Hate" poem to shame!
nice work.
-Ice
ps spellcheck line five
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Thank you so very much for leaving such a sweet message. I will read your poem shortly and I'm sure its great. Don't doubt yourself theres enough people out here willing to do that for you. Every poem is a part of you that you let the world see. So if its a piece of you then tale pride that you are brave enough to bare your soul. Okay enough philosophical mumbo jumbo. Again I thank you and look forward to reading yours. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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