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Autumn

Red and golden leaves on the trees,
a delightful sight to the eyes
Soon they will dance in the chilly breeze,
pretty prelude to winter's surprise

A contest entry

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  • Judith Chandler
    September 19, 2008
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    I like the way this flows and rhymes.

    Thank you for entering my contest.