How can I convey
how it makes me feel?
if I were shakespeare
I could do much better,
just one second with me
is all he'd craved,
to trap me in loves woe.
O I've been devoured!
A contest entry
- Sell me a Second... !!UBER CONTEST!! UBER CONTEST!! by Ditt0.
800 points, ended September 22, 2008, 20 entries
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This was an interesting write, the bg was a bit arb tho?
Oh and spell Shakespeares name with a capital please...
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I love the ending
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lively aint it?
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One moment, and you're devoured! Finding the words for the feeling may take the rest of your life.
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Good Poem
Good poem. "Love is never easy. Only in some poetry. But I'm not Oscar Wilde."
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